谁能帮我修改一下英语作文?

看不见，不是我眼睛出事了吧。
If
you
have
a
friend
who
gives
his
hand
to
you
...
In
my
life...意为‘在我的生命里’，
比during
my
life
好，因为你的一生好长着呢。
...firendship
is
the
most
valuable
wealth
and
unfading
memory
that
I
own.
when
I
was
10
...I
didn't
get
any
...(时态有问题，改称过去时比较好)
...standing
behind
me.
We
don;t
study
in
the
same...
最后一句不知所云。