高手请进！！！帮我修改一下！
看看有没有语法错误或者改的漂亮一点。谢谢啦。
i can’t understand what’s life,the meaning of life.
we live for what?money?love?make a career?or just exist?i don’t know.
my friends tell me that i should find a job,then work.yes,just do it.waste time on insignificant points?i can’t understand.
my best friend married with a guy that she didn’t love.she said it’s just her time.marriageable age.she told me that she just want a simple lfe.be married,have a baby,bring up her child,be a successful wife.mama.and secretary.i can’t understand.
i want do somgthing just because i’d like to.
It’s a crime to waste time.
希望口语一点。
呵呵。我知道很烂啦。想请教一下高手，这么讲外国人能听懂么？口语是不是语法比较随便的？
第1个回答 2007-10-17
I can’t underst what’s life,the meaning of life.
We live for what?Money?Love?make a career?or just exist?i don’t know.
my friends tell me that I should find a job,and then start working.Yes,just do it.Wasting time on insignificant points?I can’t understand.
My best friend married with a guy who she didn’t love.She said it’s just because of marriageable age.She told me that she just want to live simple lfe.Married,had a baby and then broug up her child.That't to be a successful wife,mother or secretary.I can’t understand.
I want do somgthing just because I’d like to.
It’s a crime to waste time.
已经改好,建议以多学一些英语,不要用太多的中式英语~~~还有一些最基本的要注意,像I一定要大写,句首也一定大写,要不让人觉得你的英语也太差啦,连这基本的也不注意的~~~
We live for what?Money?Love?make a career?or just exist?i don’t know.
my friends tell me that I should find a job,and then start working.Yes,just do it.Wasting time on insignificant points?I can’t understand.
My best friend married with a guy who she didn’t love.She said it’s just because of marriageable age.She told me that she just want to live simple lfe.Married,had a baby and then broug up her child.That't to be a successful wife,mother or secretary.I can’t understand.
I want do somgthing just because I’d like to.
It’s a crime to waste time.
已经改好,建议以多学一些英语,不要用太多的中式英语~~~还有一些最基本的要注意,像I一定要大写,句首也一定大写,要不让人觉得你的英语也太差啦,连这基本的也不注意的~~~
第2个回答 2007-10-17
i can’t understand what life is,what is the meaning of life.
we live for what?money?love?making a career?Or just existence? I don’t know.
my friends told me that i should find a job,then go to work.yes,just do it.To waste time on insignificant points?i can’t understand.
my best friend married with a guy that she didn’t love.she said it was just her age to marry. she told me that she just wanted a simple life, being married,having a baby,bringing up her child and being a successful wife, mama and secretary.i can’t understand.
i want to do somgthing just because i like to.
It’s a crime to waste time.本回答被提问者采纳
we live for what?money?love?making a career?Or just existence? I don’t know.
my friends told me that i should find a job,then go to work.yes,just do it.To waste time on insignificant points?i can’t understand.
my best friend married with a guy that she didn’t love.she said it was just her age to marry. she told me that she just wanted a simple life, being married,having a baby,bringing up her child and being a successful wife, mama and secretary.i can’t understand.
i want to do somgthing just because i like to.
It’s a crime to waste time.本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答 2007-10-17
错误太多了 i can’t understand what life is all about.
for what purpose we are living in this world?
wasting time on insignificant points?i can’t understand.
my best friend married a guy that she didn’t love.it's only because that she've reached the age for marriage
for what purpose we are living in this world?
wasting time on insignificant points?i can’t understand.
my best friend married a guy that she didn’t love.it's only because that she've reached the age for marriage
第4个回答 2007-10-17
好象有不少错误啊。。
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