哪位高人能帮我看看我的英语自我介绍有没有语法问题，帮我改改
Good afternoon,teachers.I'm very glad to introduce my self here.My name is xxxx.I'm a lovely girl.I'm a x years old.I'm a student of Shi Yan primary school.I'm a Class Two Great Six.I like my class very much.In my class ,we help each other,we learn together.I'm very happy. I like reading,playing games and lestening to music.I also like learning,especially learning English.Because English is very interesting,I study English hard ,so my English is very good. I believe that I well do well in the future.Iwon't let you down.Thanks for your listening.
第一行 myself应该连起来。
第二行 old 后面应该有一个girl 班级class前“a”改成"in"
第三行 help each other后的逗号改成and
第五行 interesting后逗号变成句号
最后一行 i well 改成 i will ，do well 改成do better i won't 要分开写追问
第二行 old 后面应该有一个girl 班级class前“a”改成"in"
第三行 help each other后的逗号改成and
第五行 interesting后逗号变成句号
最后一行 i well 改成 i will ，do well 改成do better i won't 要分开写追问
要不要加上什么词，让他更完整
追答我觉得 按照你的水平来讲已经很好了，内容很详实。打分的话起码90+
追问最后一句是不是 I believe that I will do better in the future
追答是的
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第1个回答 2013-05-11
I'm a x years old 没有a
.I'm in Class Two Great （Grade）Six
I well do well改成will
do well in 需要后面加宾语不能单独使用
.Iwon't let you down.去掉就可以追问
.I'm in Class Two Great （Grade）Six
I well do well改成will
do well in 需要后面加宾语不能单独使用
.Iwon't let you down.去掉就可以追问
具体怎么改
怎么在后面加宾语
第2个回答 2013-05-11
第2句得改成“ Here I am pleased to introduce myself！”比较通顺
第9句的“We learn together”必须改成“ I'm glad we learn together ”
你的倒数第二句的“ Iwon't let you down ”改成“ I Won't let you down ”
都只是一些词语排列错误
第9句的“We learn together”必须改成“ I'm glad we learn together ”
你的倒数第二句的“ Iwon't let you down ”改成“ I Won't let you down ”
都只是一些词语排列错误
第3个回答 2013-05-11
第一行，myself中间不空格。
第二行Primary School。i am in Class Two, Gread Six.
English is very interesting and useful. 如果是演讲稿，最后一行的down用 i wont make you disappointed with me. 会更好。
第二行Primary School。i am in Class Two, Gread Six.
English is very interesting and useful. 如果是演讲稿，最后一行的down用 i wont make you disappointed with me. 会更好。
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