下面是我求职的英文自我介绍，请大神帮我看看是否有语法错误,谢谢！
It is really myhonor to be here for this interview, I hope i can make a good performancetoday. I'm confident that I can succeed. First let me introduce myself. My nameis LiLiang, I am 30 years old. I come from SUZHOU, A small city of ANHUI Province.I graduated from the Anhui university of technology in July ,2008, My major is Human Resource Management ,Overthe past five years, I work in sales in three different companies, so I have veryrich experience in sales, I am also able to work under great pressure. I know that XXX is a well known company, so I hope to havethe opportunity to become a member of your staff. Ok, that’s all, Thank you .
第1个回答 2014-02-19
去掉：I hope i can make a good performancetoday. I'm confident that I can succeed. First
听上去，太不自信了。
口语化一些，如果你只需要英语的自我介绍，不妨读几遍，里面加一些口语词：去掉一些主语，比如过多的I。不必过于注意语法，毕竟如果不进行英语面试过程的话，实际上企业对于英语没有那么高的要求，也就是走个过程罢了。放松一点。
听上去，太不自信了。
口语化一些，如果你只需要英语的自我介绍，不妨读几遍，里面加一些口语词：去掉一些主语，比如过多的I。不必过于注意语法，毕竟如果不进行英语面试过程的话，实际上企业对于英语没有那么高的要求，也就是走个过程罢了。放松一点。
第2个回答 2014-02-19
It is（不用加really 太罗嗦） my honor to be here for this interview.(两句话之间不能用，号)And I believe i would make a good performance. My name is LiLiang, 30 years old. and I come from SUZHOU,in ANHUI Province.I studyin the major of Human Resource Management ,from the Anhui university of technology in July ,2008。as for my working experience Overthe past five years, I exercise in sales in three different companies which help me experience in sales, I could also work perfectly although undering great pressure. I know that XXX is a well known company where I hope to havethe opportunity to become a member . Ok, that’s all, Thank you .本回答被提问者采纳
第3个回答 2014-02-19
Very good. Some corrections suggested:
"It is really myhonor to be here for this interview, I hope i will perform well today. First please allow me to introduce myself. My nameis LiLiang, I am 30 years old. I come from SUZHOU, A small city of ANHUI Province.I graduated from the Anhui university of technology in July ,2008, My major is Human Resource Management ,During the past five years, I worked in sales department of three different companies, so I have very rich experience in sales, I am also able to work under pressure. I know that XXX is an esteemed company, so I hope to havethe opportunity to become a proud member of your company. Thank you.本回答被网友采纳
"It is really myhonor to be here for this interview, I hope i will perform well today. First please allow me to introduce myself. My nameis LiLiang, I am 30 years old. I come from SUZHOU, A small city of ANHUI Province.I graduated from the Anhui university of technology in July ,2008, My major is Human Resource Management ,During the past five years, I worked in sales department of three different companies, so I have very rich experience in sales, I am also able to work under pressure. I know that XXX is an esteemed company, so I hope to havethe opportunity to become a proud member of your company. Thank you.本回答被网友采纳
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