我的英语自我介绍 帮我看看是否有什么语法错误
Good morning teachers
i am very glad to be here for your interview .And i hope i can make a good performance today
my name is xxx i am 17 years old .i was a charater ,cheeful girl .And i like smile
in my spare time i like to read novels, i often buy some books and magzines to read .i enjoy the reading time .and i think reading could enlarge my knowdge
i am fond of music my favorite band is sodagreen ,their music feel so cosy and i like english ,too . i think language is very interesting and useful .Although my english is not good enough but i will study hard.i will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.
then , i will talk about my family .There are 3 people in my family .my mother my father and i 。My family is pretty good.I love my sweet warm home.
that 's all thanks
告诉我如何具体修改
谢谢
2.错误：“.And ”---去掉and，另起一句或接前句。
3.I am a happy girl and a girl of character. I smile a lot / I smile to everyone I meet.
4.另起一段（爱好）： I like reading very much and I buy books、magzines quite often. Reading not only enlarges my knowdge, but also brings a great enjoyment to me. I am also fond of music. My favorite band is sodagreen, their music makes me feel so cosy.
5.另起一段（学习）： I learn English hard, I think it is very interesting and useful. Although my English is not very good at present, I would try my best to learn it well，no matter how difficult it will be.
6. Also，allow me to introduce my family to you. My family is a typical family of three people: my father, my mother and me. I have a happy family and I love them very much.(可以适当介绍下你父母是做什么的，)
That 's all.
Thanks for your listening.
————你的内容比较少，毕竟是interview, 多准备一点说的东西，掐好时间，表达的句式尽量多样化。
改成attending this interview
2.I am a girl with distinct charactericstics and positive sipirit.你这句时态不对
3.reading 就可以了，不用加novels整句改为
i like reading and i usually enjoy novels and magazines during my spare time.
4.My favorite band is greensoda for their cozy music.
5.后面喜欢英语另外起句，不要用and跟前面连一起
6.Although后面不用but了，英语没这用法
7.my mother, father and I，不用再加my了
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改完了，其实没多少语法错误，只是文章显得比较中式英语，需要帮你改得更通顺更高级点的话HI我嘛～希望对你有帮助
knowdge 应为knowledge
their music feel ——feels
3 people -3members更好一点但是没有语法错误
I am very glad to be here for your interview .And i hope i can make a good performance today
My name is xxx i am 17 years old .i was a character, cheerful girl .And i like smile
In my spare time i like to read novels, i often buy some books and magazines to read .i enjoy the reading time .and i think reading could enlarge my knowledge
I am fond of music my favorite band is soda green, their music feel so cozy and i like English, too. I think language is very interesting and useful .Although my English is not good enough but i will study hard. I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.
then , i will talk about my family .There are 3 people in my family .my mother my father and i 。My family is pretty good. I love my sweet warm home.
That’s all thanks
这是我改过后的文章，你有点拼写错误，语法好像没有。你看看吧
their music feels~~~
这自我介绍写的太浅了，太简单～，多看点书，每句话都以：I …… ，my ……开头可不好～
their music feel......，feel后面应该加-s。
其他的应该就没什么了！
