英语自我介绍 帮我看看我有没有语法错误哦

Hello,everyone!My name is Gong Hongxian.My English name is Avril.I’m a student from Jiangbei foreign language school.I’m in Class three Grade seven.I am 13 years old now. I'm an active ,lovely and clever girl.I’m good at singing,playing sports and photography.I also like soccer,and my favorite team is Argentina,because they have Lionel Messi.He is really handsome and very good at playing soccer. I enjoy most of my time listening to music and playing soccer or basketball. And I also like reading,it’s useful and relaxing for me.Do you like me?