请帮我看看下面的英语自我介绍短文有没有错误存在，谢谢了！！
This is me!
My name is Deng Jingyi.I am 13 years old.I was born in Jiangyin. I came from Chengnan Primary School.
I am not very tall.I don’t wear glass.I have black eyes and my hair is frizzly. I am an outgoing and ively girl.I hope we could be good friends!
I love dancing very much.I always study it at the weekends.I like reading,too.I think reading is very interesting.I am good at Art and Music.So I like drawing and listening to music.And I don’t do well in Maths.
everyone is very pleased to spend three years of junior secondary school life. I am looking forward to the future and we've gone through life, hoping to a better understanding as we, together with all progress, share fun, grow together. We're going to fuel toward their goal!
This is me!
I am not very tall.I don’t wear glass.I have black eyes and my hair is frizzly. I am an outgoing and lively girl.I hope we could be good friends!
I love dancing very much.I always study it at the weekends.I like reading,too.I think reading is very interesting.I am good at Art and Music.So I like drawing and listening to music,but I don’t do well in Maths.
everyone is very pleased to spend three years of junior secondary school life. I am looking forward to the future and we've gone through life, hoping to a better understanding as we, together with all progress, share fun, grow together. We're going to fuel toward our goal!
没什么大问题，改了一点。
请帮我看看下面的英语自我介绍短文有没有错误存在,谢谢了!!
I am not very tall.I don’t wear glass.I have black eyes and my hair is frizzly. I am an outgoing and lively girl.I hope we could be good friends!I love dancing very much.I always study it at the weekends.I like reading,too.I think reading is very interesting.I am ...
我写的英文的自我介绍,请高手帮忙看看有没有错误的地方,急!!!
I like the blue sea very much and I like blue,too.首先想说你写的已经很好了，基本上没有什么语法错误，继续加油~大家早上好。我叫Gao Yu，今年13岁，就读于Dong Guan小学六年级一班。我非常喜欢玩电脑和学英语。我还经常和同学们一起玩电脑游戏。面条是我的最爱，我觉得它很好吃。我很喜欢大...
我有一篇英语自我介绍,请哪位高手帮我看看有没有语法错误!
I'd like to be your friend.
...的简单自我介绍,请高手们帮我看看语法有没有错误地方,谢谢
I like to play badminton, I hope we can play badminton some day.The above is my brief introduction, thank you for your listening. Thanks!你写的基本正确，个别小地方我做了改动~~呵呵~
求高手帮忙看看英文的自我介绍?。请帮忙修改错误地方!
Good afternoon。I am XX. Thank you for giving me the opportunity. It is really a great honor for me to have this opportunity for the interview.The following is my brief introdution. I am 19 years old and currently study in Shanghai Nanhu Vocational School and will graduate in...
英语2分钟的自我介绍,帮看看有没有语法错误
Although my English is poor,I still enjoy learning it.As an old saying goes 'everything is possible',I'm sure I can learn English well once I stick to it.That's all for my brief introduction.Thanks for your listening!!文章整体上写得很不错，语序稍作调整就完美了，英文中要...
英语自我介绍,帮我看看何不合适,还有哪些语法错误,连贯性咋滴,顺便帮...
Good morning ,boys and girls,当你是长辈的时候用boys和girls,如果是同辈的话最好还是everyone .by the way ,there are 5 people in my family ,Both my father and my mother are farmers ,my father and my mother 改 my parent secondly,in my space time ,i like to read novels,改 I...
面试自我介绍英语。请帮我看看有没有语法错误,并帮我改正。或者有没有...
hello 用在这儿有些不妥，应根据时间选择Good morning\/afternoon\/evening. I am Jimeng(名) YANG (姓) and my English name is Mary. I am very happy to meet you all. I'm 12 and currently attending Wuyi Primary School. I like to read books during my spare time. I think reading ...
我的英语自我介绍 帮我看看是否有什么语法错误
1.建议：It is really my honor to have this opportunity for this interview。2.错误：“.And ”---去掉and，另起一句或接前句。3.I am a happy girl and a girl of character. I smile a lot \/ I smile to everyone I meet.4.另起一段（爱好）： I like reading very much and ...
小学生自我介绍,请看看有没有错误
this year is 11 years old 改I am11 years old this year。 My family has five people.They are my grandpa, my grandma, my father, my mother and I.
