第1个回答 2011-03-06
There are eight people in my dormitory with whom we've lived more than two years, so we feel like a family. We address eath other as sisters in order of age. The first and second as well as third elder sister all come from Shouguang , the county of vegetable. The fourth elder sister is from Rizhao. Qingdao, a sea city, is the hometown of the fifth and sixth elder sister.
第2个回答 2011-03-06
There are eight people in my dorm .We have lived together for more than two years,so we are just like families.According to our age,we call each other sisters.The first , second and third sisters are from Shouguang-- a vegetables township ----,the forth is Rizhao--a beautiful city ,the fifth and sixth are Qingdao--a costal city, and I'm Innermongolia.the eighth is, the farthest, Xingqiang.The first and the forth havethe same hobby-- reading novels.while the others including me ,we like go shopping or see movies.The fifth is our example her grades in the class is ranked highly. It's lucky for us to get together from all over the country.Although there are some small conflicts, we get along well.Only one year left for us,after this year we'll seperate,so we cherish the happy days together very much.
第3个回答 2011-03-06
We lived in eight quarters. We lived together for more than two years, so close as a family man. We called each other according to seniority of age and sisters. Third Sister Sister and sister are from Shouguang City --- the hometown of vegetables. Sister city from the beautiful sunshine. Five sisters and six sisters from the coastal city of Qingdao. I ranked seventh, from Inner Mongolia. Bamei farthest home in Xinjiang. Sister and Sister have a common hobby is reading novels. The rest of us are more like shopping movies. Five sister is our role model, her grades are among the best in the class. Together we are really a fate far apart. While there will always be some small contradictions, but we get along very harmonious. Necessary to separate more than one year, we all cherish the good times together.
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第4个回答 2011-03-06
We lived in eight quarters. We lived together for more than two years, so close as a family man. We called each other according to seniority of age and sisters. Third Sister Sister and sister are from Shouguang City --- the hometown of vegetables. Sister city from the beautiful sunshine. Five sisters and six sisters from the coastal city of Qingdao. I ranked seventh, from Inner Mongolia. Bamei farthest home in Xinjiang. Sister and Sister have a common hobby is reading novels. The rest of us are more like shopping movies. Five sister is our role model, her grades are among the best in the class. Together we are really a fate far apart. While there will always be some small contradictions, but we get along very harmonious. Necessary to separate more than one year, we all cherish the good times together.
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