求帮忙修改英文简历，当晚就评最佳，大家帮帮忙

考研后，英语简历一直拖到现在，很急。自己打了个草稿，一方面自己e文写作水平有限，另一方面简历里出现错误是很致命的。故请高手们改一下，谢谢了。只有20分，最好今晚10点就要，改得好的可以考虑加分。部分中文简历里的话，是在不会翻成e文，大都意译，高手可能的话也帮忙加两句，再一次谢谢了。

Personal Information
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Objective
To obtain a challenging position as a electronic engineer with an emphasis in force electricity and automatic control.

Education:

xx university

After four years university study, I have thoroughly grasped the electrical aspect specialize delementary knowledge, and skilled has grasped the monolithicintegrated circuit, the microcomputer, the digital electron ,the electrical motor and so on the specialized skill, Urged on by the strong interest in electronic knowledge ,I studies assiduously during four years and get average GPA upon 3.0 .

Computer Skill
I am skilled at a host of office softwares, and also C language, Matlab programme and simulation , SCM programme, autoCAD,Protel, ,and have a limited ability of DSP programme and Ansys （finite element analysis）operation.

Language Skill
Have a good command of both spoken and written English .Pass CET6 when I was sophomore.

Self-evaluation
Demonstrated ability to learn new skills quickly. Excellent interpersonal skills.
I submit the requisition to be a party member,and graduate from party school in 2004.During the 4 years,I was hard working,the average GPA is above 3 and also make a great efforts to study english,past CET 4when I was a Freshman,then past CET 6 after a half of year. Good in communication with people and like a lot of out door activities organized by college of class to learn how to tackle with people from different walks of life.

Hobbies
Like athletic sports,especially in playing basketball ,and participate the ee cup basketball championship and win the runners-up twice.