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Psychological problems seem like that just having a little relationship between being an employer or an employee. But around us, there are really some examples, for instance, person commit suicide because of failure on business, people get melancholia due to the dilemma of business and so on. Working stress can be also caused by other factors like increasing demands, less freedom to control one’s work, insufficient capacity to cope with time pressures, etc. An Integra Survey similarly reported that: 65% of workers said that workplace stress had caused difficulties and more than 10 percent described these as having major effects.The instance above can evidently show us that being an employee has lot of pressure during their working time, but thinking of the employer, they are also having stress all the days. But they can dispense pressure to employees by setting many rules to press employees achieve a satisfactory workload.

Employer has to be responsible; we can see that form some detail thing like: employers have to provide a workplace free from serious recognized hazards and comply with standards, rules and regulations issued under the Occupational Safety and Health Act of 1970 .Responsibility of an employer might be considered heavier then it of an employee, for the reason that we can see lot of employee just takes a little responsibility and to their work, but for an employer, them have to be responsible for their own business and also be responsible for their staffs and all of their decision.

For all the compares above, I prefer be an employee rather than do my own business. I don’t like take such a risk in my life. My mother had running business before, but now she is an employee. She said that doing own business was really difficult, and hardly to be success. Although there are little exciting thing during her running own business, now she looks back, she prefer to be an employee as well. For me, to be an employee is absolutely a better choose. Maybe the repeated life is easy be bored but the risk of being a boss I can’t accept. In conclusion I think all of us have a different character, some people like peaceful and regular life but someone like exciting. To be an employee of an employer is their own choose.

第1个回答  2008-02-16
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