求高人看看我的英语自我介绍作文写得有什么问题 帮我改下

Hellow evebady my name's Liu xin yi. garaduated from primary school zhao ming. I'm 13 year's old . I like palying guiter and radeing book. I think the book a house of gold oniy radeing we can progrss, so I love radeing book. tank you.

1,Hello everybody
2,名字后应该为，graduated
3，学校名应大写首字母
4，playing the guitar
5，reading
I think a book is a house of gold。We can't make any progress without reading，so I love reading books。Thank you。

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