急!!高分!!关于英语翻译的!

我是高一的学生,明天就要上课了,而明天上英语课我们有FREE TALK这个环节。。
明天该我了,求高人速度翻译!

求译:
大家好,我的名字叫JOE,今天是我的TALK SHOW时间。
我的英语成绩不好,但我很努力的在学习。
我希望能和大家多多交流,分享英语学习的方法。
因为我的理想是能够出国学习(留学),所以掌握英语是必要的。
希望大家能够多多帮助我学好英语,谢谢。

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第1个回答  2009-02-22
hello everybody ,my name is joe, this is my talk show time.
my english is poor but i am trying my best to make it.
so i want to communicate with you and share the ways of english study.
i hope i can study abroad in the future, so i think i must handle it . I hope you can do a favor for me Thank you very much
第2个回答  2009-02-22
hi, guys, i am joe and this is my day to share you a free talk. well, i am learning hard of english despite it is not that good so far. as i am planning to study abroad in the future, so it's necessary indeed to get my english improved, and this way i would like to have more chance sharing with you guys about english studying, and finally, of cause, it's much appreciated if you guys could help this way...
第3个回答  2009-02-22
Hello everyone here.My name is Joe,This is my talk show time.
I'm not very good at English but I'm studying hard.
I hope I can conmmunicate with you a lot,to share ways of studing English.
It's very important to have a good command of English because I want to study abroad.
Wish you can help me on my English.
Thanks a lot .
第4个回答  2009-02-22
Hello everyone, my name is JOE, today is my TALK SHOW time.

My English score well, but I was trying very hard in the study.

I hope a lot of energy and everyone would share their English language learning approach.

Because my vision is to be able to study abroad , so master the English language is necessary.

I hope everyone can help me a lot to learn English well, thank you.
第5个回答  2009-02-22
Hello everyone, my name is JOE, today is my time to TALK SHOW.
My English score well, but I was trying very hard in the study.
I hope a lot of energy and everyone would share their English language learning approach
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