楼上的基本上对。有几点建议。
1. park, not pard. 相信是typo.
2. The pard opens between April to September, 7 days a week, from 10 am to 6 pm. The price is $15 for adults, $7 for children, and you can also spend only $28 for the whole family.
这段比较chinglish. 是不是这样改:
The park opens daily 10 am to 6pm from April through September. Ticket price is $15 per adult, $7 per child, or $28 for family.
3. We has original.... 语法错误。 We have....
4. western, not westen, operats, another typo, operates;
5. operates all the day. wrong, 应该是 all day
6. You can book tickets on the internet, and you can buy tickets at a half price 30 minutes before the performance.
英文中这种句子通常用被动。 例如:
The tickets can be purchased on the internet... 诸如此类。
另外, 英文和中文不同。 不要用逗号连接两个独立的句子。 如:
We has original westen show every Saturday and Sunday, the performance begins at 2 pm and lasts for 2 hours.
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The park opens daily 10 am to 6pm from April through September. Ticket price is $15 per adult, $7 per child, or $28 for family. An original western show is offered every Saturday and Sunday. The performance begins at 2 pm and lasts for 2 hours. There are free shuttles from downtown to the park Monday to Friday morning, and all-day at weendends, and holidays. The tickets can be booked on the internet. Half-priced tickets might be available 30 minutes before the performance starts.
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