假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)

假定你是李华,正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程,遇到一些困难,希望得到学校辅导中心(Learning Center)的帮助。根据学校规定,你需书面预约,请按下列要点写一封信:1.本人简介; 2.求助内容; 3.约定时间; 4.你的联系方式(Email:lihua@126.com;Phone:12345678)注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.结束语已为你写好。Dear Sir/Madam, Look forward to your reply.


Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. I’m writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-taking and I have no idea of how to use the library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you. I have no lessons on Tuesday mornigs and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is OK with you. You may e-mail or phone me. Here are my e-mail address and phone number: Email:lihua@126.com; Phone:12345678
Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua


试题分析: 考生如果想拿到高分,必须按照要求在作文中覆盖试题规定的所有内容要点,完成试题任务,达到预期的写作目的。在写作时,考生应该留心是否要点完整,是否有要点遗漏。在题示要点完整的前提下,考生可以作文材料为中心进行适当地发挥,适当补充一部分,以期使作文更加完美。在信中注意写作的语气及时态。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如taking summer courses, ask for help, I have some difficulties with, Look forward to your reply, I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and I’m anxious to get help from you.还运用了Here are my e-mail address and phone number倒装句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如:But;and等等。
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