英语短文改错，急急急！帮帮忙！
We are all busy talking about and use the Internet which set up in the 1960s.At first, the Internet was only used by the government,but in early 1970s,the universities,hospitals and banks were allowed to use it,too.However,computers were even very expensive and the Internet was difficult to use it.By the start of the 1990s,computers become cheaper and easier.Today it is easy to get on-line and it is talked that million of people use the Internet every day.Send e-mail is more and more popular among students.It has now become one of the most important parts of people's life.
We are all busy talking about and (use改成using) the Internet which (加入was) set up in the 1960s. At first, the Internet was only used by the government, but in (加入the) early 1970s, (去掉the) universities, hospitals and banks were allowed to use it, too. However, computers were (even改成still) very expensive and the Internet was difficult to use (去掉it). By the start of the 1990s, computers (become改成became) cheaper and easier. Today it is easy to get on-line and it is (talked改成said) that (million改成millions) of people use the Internet every day. (Send改成Sending) e-mail is more and more popular among students. It has now become one of the most important parts of people's life.
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Internet which（加 was) set up in the 1960s.At first,
the Internet was only used by the
government,but in(加 the) early 1970s,the (去掉the)
universities,hospitals and banks were
allowed to use it,too.However,computers were even very expensive and the Internet was difficult to use it(去it).By the start of the 1990s,computers (加 had) become cheaper and easier.Today it is easy to get on-line and it is talked(改为said) that million of people use the Internet every day.Send (改为Sending)e-mail is more and more popular among students.It has now become one of the most important parts of（改为 in) people's life本回答被网友采纳
Internet which (加入was) set up in the 1960s.At first,
the Internet was only used by the
government,but(however) in early 1970s,the (去掉the)
universities,hospitals and banks were
allowed to use it(去掉it). ,too.However,computers were even very expensive and the Internet was difficult to use it.By the start of the 1990s,computers become (became)cheaper and easier.Today it is easy to get on-line and it is talked that million of people use the Internet every day.Send (Sending) e-mail is more and more popular among (with/among) students.It has now become one of the most important parts of people's life.
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