Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Most Unforgettable Thing (最难忘的一件事). You should write more than 100 words in this composition.
1. 介绍这件让你难忘的事情。
2. 说明这件事情对你的生活或者学习有什么影响;
Yesterday,my mum took me to the park. We took a bus there. When the bus stoped at a bus stop.There came an old woman. My mum standed up and gave her seat to the old lady.She told me that she likes to help others because she will get happy after helping others. I am very happy that day.And I will remember this thing forever.
昨天妈妈带我去公园玩,公车到站是上来一位老太太,妈妈让座给她,并告诉我帮助别人能给自己带来快乐,这件事老让我印象深刻。
需要改进的地方:
1、过去时态
2、加时间、地点、起因
3、字数要求达到120字以上