面试自我介绍英语。请帮我看看有没有语法错误，并帮我改正。或者有没有更好的。
Hello, teachers! I'm
glad to meet you.My name isYANGJIMENG and my English name is Mary. I'm 12 years
old. I am studying in WuYi Primary school. I have many hobbies, such as
swimming、drawing、reading books and so on. Among them read books
Is my favorite hobby. I often reading books at home. By the way ,I want to be a winter in the future
. I hope I can go to BeiDaziyuan Middle School and become a student there. That's
all. Thanks a lot.
谢谢
我做了一些修改，希望对你有帮助。追问
. 非得这样说吗I am Jimeng(名) YANG (姓)
追答中国人讲英文通常都会用 My name is, 而在美国，我们通常用I am 来说姓名。
两句都可以，但 I am 更加口语化点。
还有问题吗?
I am YANGJimeng可以吗
追答姓名 做英文里一定要颠倒， 即 先 名 后 姓。
......I have many hobbies, such as
swimming、drawing、reading books and so on. Among which reading books
Is my favorite hobby. (I often reading books at home.)去掉这句重复......I want to be a winter /winner
说一下你所了解的BeiDaziyuan Middle School ，你的目标是什么，这样你的作文会丰满些
欢迎追问，望采纳
. I hope I can go to BeiDaziyuan Middle School and become a student of there. That's
all. Thanks a lot.
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