求一篇英语作文,名叫《我最好的朋友》。要求语法正确。

唉……语文作文再好……英语作文就不行咯~没感情……要语法正确。随便什么都可以(名字)。要有性格,长相,特点。感谢!

My Best Friend
A friend is a person who can let you feel warm when you are depressed.So I have many friends.But XXX is my best friend.He is as old as me.He taller than me.Basketball is his favorite sport.We are in the same class.He is good at study.So his study is very good.We learn from each other and help each other.He will help me if i got in trouble.I will help he as much as I can. I hope our friendship will forever and ever.

A friend is someone who can let you feel warm when you are depressed. I have many friends. However I only have one best friend and it's XXX. He is the same age as me. He is taller than me. Basketball is his favourite sport. We are in the same class. He likes studying and is good at it, so he gets high marks. We learn from each other and help each other. He will help me if I ever get into troubles. So will I. I hope our friendship will last forever and ever.

A person改成someone更好一些,someone也是一个人的意思,但是更正规些.So可以删掉.But XXX is my best friend.我改成了However I only have one best friend and it's XXX.但是我只有一个最好的朋友,他是XXX.他比我高的那句话里要加个is.后面有的地方我也稍微修改了一下.最后一句话我加了个last,直接说forever的话不通顺.
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第1个回答  2013-07-11
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Hello, everyone! My name is Xing Xiaoqing. You can call me Cherry.
I’m in Class 0506. Li Nan is my best friend. She’s thirteen years old. Her birthday is on 3rd October and she was born in Shen Zhen. She lives with her family in Haimen. She’s 1.60 metres tall. She has black hair and she wears glasses. She is very lovely and pretty.
She likes eating dumplings, chocolates, peanuts and vegetables. She dislikes pork, sweets and green tea.
She loves listening to music. She has lots of CDs. She likes reading and writing. She is the newest member of the Maths Club. She has many hobbies, such as dancing, running and playing computer games. Her favorite hobby is drawing, because she likes all the different colors. It is fun to look at the pictures when she finishes drawing them. The Dragon Boat Festival is her favorite day. She wants to be a doctor when she grows up.
We always have fun. We sit under the trees at lunchtime and have a good chat. Sometimes, we buy snacks from the tuck shop. On Sunday, we usually go to the bookshop. We often study together.
My best friend is really great!

2.
My best Friend
Li Yan,my best friend,is my classmate. She has big eyes. Her long hair is often plained.Sweet smile is often on her face,which makes her more lively.
LiNan is very clever.She is good at her school subjects. She has won the school scholarship twice,I always take her as my model in study. She tells me that we should make good use of time.
Li Yan is kind-hearted and is always ready to help others,Any student in my class who has trouble in study likes asking her for help. But she doesn’t like others to praise her, because she thinks what she did is ordinary.
I feel proud to have such a friend.
第2个回答  2013-07-11
My friend best
I have a good friend,he is a boy
第3个回答  2013-07-11
My best friend
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