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2006年12月11日,我国将结束为期5年的“过渡期”,开始全面履行对世贸组织的承诺。这意味着我国金融将全面融入世界金融体系,我国银行业将与外资银行展开全面的竞争。外资银行将以其丰富的经验、优良的服务、卓越的管理给我国银行业带来巨大的冲击和挑战。我国银行体系必须加紧完善以迎接残酷的竞争。近几年,我国加速对国有四大商业银行进行股份制改革,并陆续上市,以完善银行体系和壮大规模。本文对我国的银行业的发展现状和存在的问题进行分析和总结,同时对我国银行业的发展提出了相应的对策和建议。
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第1个回答  2006-11-12
应该是:
On December 11, 2006, our country finished for 5 years "thetransition-period", starts comprehensively to fulfill to World TradeOrganization's pledge. This will mean our country financecomprehensively will melt into the world finance system, our countrybanking industry launches the comprehensive competition with theforeign capital bank. The foreign capital silver about to by its richexperience, the fine service, the remarkable management brings thehuge impact and the challenge for our country banking industry. Ourcountry bank system must step up to consummate greets the brutalcompetition. In recent years, our country accelerates to thestate-owned four big commercial bank to carry on the joint stocksystem reform, and goes on the market one after another, consummatesthe bank system and expands the scale. This article carries on theanalysis and the summary to our country banking industry's developmentpresent situation and the existence question, simultaneously proposedthe corresponding countermeasure and the suggestion to our countrybanking industry's development.
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第2个回答  2006-11-08
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December 11th, 2006, our nation will conclude the duration of five year's "transitional period", begin to implement the promise to the World Trade Organisation. This implies that our finance will be fully integrated into the financial world's financial system, our banking industry will face comprehensive competitions with foreign banks. Overseas investment banks with a wealth of experience, excellent service, and predominant management will bring enormous challenges to our banking industry where facing great impact is inevitable. Our banking system must step up the efforts to improve and amend in order to meet the fiercest competition. In recent years, our nation have accelerated our four major commercial banks to reform and advances in its shares system, in order to come into market with succession and meet the requirement of our banking system's grand perfection.
This text is to analyze and summarize the development and existent problems of the banking insdutry in modern society, at the same time, it provide corresponding countermeasures and advice to the development of our banking system.
第3个回答  2006-11-08
On december 11th,2006,china will end the transitional period of five years,and perform the promise to the WTO completly. This means that the finance of China will mix with that of the world's,banks of overseas will compitete with our banks sharply.They will chanllege and influence us by plentiful experience,nice servise and remarkable management. Our bank systerm must make it prefect,and face to the fierce competitions. In recent years,the government has accelerate the reform of the four national banks in their stocks,and had appear on stock market in order to enlarge the scale and make it perfect. The passage analyzise that the development of banks and problems in which it exists, and give us a summary of bank systerm, it also give us an advise and tactics on it.

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第4个回答  2006-11-14
ON December 11, 2006, China will put an end to a five-year "transitional period".begin full implementation of WTO commitments.This means that China will be fully integrated into the financial world financial system, China's banking industry will launch a comprehensive competition with foreign banks.Foreign banks would bring a wealth of experience, excellent service, excellent management and the impact of China's banking industry has brought enormous challenges.China must step up efforts to improve the banking system to meet the fiercest competition.In recent years, China's four major state-owned commercial banks to accelerate the reform of the shareholding and listed,to improve and expand the scale of the banking system.In this paper, and the current development of China's banking industry to analyze and summarize the problems.the development of China's banking industry and the corresponding countermeasures proposed.Add : Please do not use translation software...Thank you...
第5个回答  2006-11-13
December 11th in 2006, the our country will end 5- years"transition period", start implementing the commitment that organizes to the world trade completely.This mean the our country finance will integrate financial system in world completely, the our country banking will launch an overall competition with the foreign capital bank.Experience,good service,outstanding management that the foreign capital bank will enrich with it brings the our country banking huge impact and the challenge.The our country bank system has to be step up perfect with greet a ruthlessness competition.In the last few years, the our country acceleration carries on the share system reform to stateowned four greatest commercial banks, and appear on market continuously, with perfect bank system with strengthen large-scale.The development present condition and existent problem of the banking of this text to our country carry on the analysis and summary, in the meantime to our country the development of the banking put forward correspond of the counterplan and the suggestion.
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