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Compare the education between China and New Zealand
Education is very important, because it’s an aspect of one country. It also can change one times of people’s ability, acknowledge, behaviour, morality, act. Different education systems bring up different kind of students.
Generally speaking, comparing the education system of China and New Zealand, review many differences. Chinese education system emphasis too much on teaching but neglect the importance of capability, New Zealand’s is in opposition to Chinese’s, educators in New Zealand put more attention on training practical abilities.
Students studying in China have a lot of competition pressures. Parents always tell their children that they should have the good manner of studying hard towards goals as a Chinese tradition. Chinese think that students with good foundation can make further knowledge better, big expectations from family make students study harder. In order to increase the choice of colleges’ admission, many ambition students in high school even learn the curriculum of the first year in college.
According to a recent survey, Chinese students usually have to spend at least two to four hours to finish their homework after eight hours studying at school. Especially the year 13 students in high school, it takes them almost whole night to do homework, review the lessons and memorize different kinds of formulas for success on failure Chinese College Entrance Examination. CCEE can change a student’s life, and also their family.
On one hand, this exam learning method gives students high levels of information for exams. But on the other hand, to some degree, creation and imagination are stifled. Students learn knowledge through classes that are conducted by teachers inside the classroom, and they are studying for exams only.When exams are coming, students begin to recite the knowledge in texts, but when exams are over, they will forget most of this knowledge.
By contrast, students who study in high school in New Zealand are more freedom. They can choice the subject what they are really interested in, such as accounting, economics, tourism, food and hospitality, graphic, dance, art and so on. Educators encourage students to have their own opinions and do research on their own. An investigation shows that students tend to a favourable attitude toward to do experiment and research, cause doing research can help them to analysis problems and solve difficulties by themselves.
Chinese education system is good at building students always following traditional rules and regulations. In China, the “good student” is who always abbeys rules and regulations, following traditions and general habits.
New Zealand education system lets students show more individual character in personal development, they become the master of their own destiny. They are more ingenious and creative.
To sum up, Chinese education system and NZ education system have their own advantages and disadvantages. No matter what the education systems are, they must be suitable for the history and situation of the country. If we could join two systems together, there is going be the prefect education system and students could become comprehensive.
Education is very important, because it’s an aspect of one country. It also can change people’s ability, acknowledge, behaviour, morality, act. and Different education systems bring up different kind of students.
first, when comparing the education system of China and New Zealand, we can find many differences. Chinese education system emphasis too much on teaching but neglects the importance of capability. on the contrast , educators in New Zealand put more attention on training practical abilities.
second Students studying in China have a lot of competition pressures. their Parents always tell them that they should studying hard and enter into a good university .this is a Chinese tradition. Chinese think that students with good foundation can have a bright future. In order to increase the choice of colleges’ admission, many ambition students in high school even learn the curriculum of the first year in college.
According to a recent survey, Chinese students usually have to spend at least two to four hours to finish their homework after eight hours studying at school. Especially the students in high school,they spent almost whole night doing their homework, reviewing the lessons and memorizing different kinds of formulas for success on Chinese College Entrance Examination.
Education is very important, because it’s an aspect of one country. It also can change one times of people’s ability, acknowledge, behaviour, morality, act and so on. Different kinds of students are brought up by varied education system. (Different education systems bring up different kind of students.)
Generally speaking, though comparing the education system of China and New Zealand, you may found out many differences. Chinese education system emphasises largely on teaching but neglects the importance of capability, however , New Zealand’s is in opposition to Chinese’s, educators in New Zealand put more attention on training students’ practical abilities.
Students studying in China often suffer from competition pressures. Parents always tell their children that they should have the good study habitat and work hard to entering a prestigious university ,which is a Chinese tradition. Chinese think that students with good foundation can make further knowledge better, and huge expectations from family and relatives make students study harder. In order to increase the choice of colleges’ admission, many ambitive students in high school even learn the college’s curriculum of the first year.
According to a recent survey, Chinese students usually have to spend two to four hours to finish their homework after eight hours studying at school. Especially the year 13 students in high school(不知所云), it takes them almost whole night to do homework, review the lessons and memorize different kinds of formulas for success on failure Chinese College Entrance Examination. CCEE can change a student’s life, and also their family.
Though learning method for this exam gives students high levels of information for exams, yet to some extent, creation and imagination are stifled. Students learn knowledge through classes that are conducted by teachers in the classroom, and they study only for their solitary aim-exam .When exams are approching, students begin to recite all the knowledge, but when exams past, they will forget most of them .
By contrast, students who study in high school in New Zealand have more freedom. They can choice the subject which they are really interested in, such as accounting, economics, tourism, food and hospitality, graphic, dance, art and so on. Educators encourage students to have their own opinions and do their own research. An investigation shows that students who tends to have a favorable attitude on experiment and research, can help them to analysis problems and solve difficulties by themselves.
Chinese education system is good at cultivating students following traditional rules and regulations. In China, the “good student” is who always abbeys rules and regulations, following traditions and general habits.
New Zealand education system lets students show more individual character in personal development, they become the master of their own destiny. They are more ingenious and creative.
问题补充：
To sum up, Chinese education system and NZ education system have their own advantages and disadvantages. No matter what the education systems are, they must be suitable for the history and situation of the country. If we could join two systems together, there is going be the prefect education system and students could become more comprehensive.
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