谁能帮我看看我写的英文译文有没有语法错误，明天答辩，急用！！！！谢谢！！！ 译文

谁能帮我看看我写的英文译文有没有语法错误，明天答辩，急用！！！！谢谢！！！

译文
Abstract With the rapid development of electronic commerce, express industry plays an increasingly important role in its development process. However, objectively speaking, China's express delivery industry is in the beginning stages of development, there are many problems to be solved. November 11, 2009, Alibaba Lynx mall for the first time launched the "11.11" shopping carnival, since then the annual "11.11" were amazing record. Again and again a huge volume of transactions constantly refresh the transaction, however, the courier industry but then again and again it is a huge challenge. This paper studies the main reason for the logistics warehouse explosion in "11.11" period and make reasonable suggestions, First, combine the meaning of the logistics warehouse explosion, influences, and in recent years the "11.11" situation, Analysis of domestic logistics in the "11.11" during the express company warehouse explosion Problems and can be specific implementation initiatives. I hope to inspire logistics enterprises in the future development strategy, to the express delivery companies and related departments to deal with the courier warehouse explosion problem to help. Keywords: Express warehouse explosion; express delivery; reason; Strategy

请问您这是用百度翻译的吧？简直是天书，本想替您改一下，但通篇看完之后.....建议您还是照着我下面所写的来吧.....
下面是我根据你所写的这些东西的理念整理的，我已经很用心了，估计不会猜错您的意思，您上面写的实在是.....估计没几个人看得懂。
Abstract
With the rapid development of electronic commerce, express industry plays an increasingly important role. However, objectively speaking, Chinese express delivery industry is at the beginning stages. There are many problems have to be solved. On November. 11, 2009, it's the first time for Alibaba Lynx mall launched the "11. 11' shopping festival. Since then, annual "11. 11" had amazing records. Again and again, a huge volume of transactions was refreshed. However, the courier industry faced the huge challenge, too. This thesis analyzes the main reason for the logistics warehouse explosion on "11.11" and makes reasonable suggestions. Analyzes the reasons and influences of the logistics warehouse explosion, illustrates the situation of "11. 11" of these years. By the analysis of the express company warehouse explosion during "11. 11', discusses the specific implementation initiatives. I hope to help express delivery companies and related departments deal with the courier warehouse explosion problem, then inspire logistics enterprises on development stage in the future.
Keywords: Express warehouse explosion; express delivery; reasons; Strategy

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