英语自我介绍 我想这么些 请大家帮我看看有没有语法错误
hello evreybody.my name is wujiahao.i like play computer games.of course, not daota(魔兽的一个地图，我们班连着两个人说喜欢我这个 我澄清一下)my favourite computer game named as Crossfire .because i like gun.i am excited when i see them.the sound of shooting is gripping.next i will Say a tongue twisters:
大家帮我看一下 顺便帮我选一个简短搞笑的绕口令
daota应该是dota
前面的of course最好改成but 毕竟是转折。
named as用is就好，这样是错误的表达
gun改成guns喜欢枪支
when改成everytime更好 每当我看到……
them和the sound之间最好用and直接连起来 这样更连贯
say改成tell
twisters改成twister，是一个，用单数
绕口令
A tall eastern girl named Short long loved a big Mr. Little. But Little, thinking little of Short, loved a little lass named Long. To belittle Long. Short announced She would marry Little before long. This caused Little shortly to marry Long. To make a long story short, did tall Short love big Little less because Little loved little Long more?
my favourite computer game is named as....
the sound of shooting is gripping.griping最好改成 attractive 吸引人的 或者是 charming 有魅力的 比较好
每句开头要大写,I也要大写.
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