假如你是李明,最近你的朋友张华因考试不利情绪低落,学习消极应付。请你用英语给他写一封e-mail劝慰他,

假如你是李明,最近你的朋友张华因考试不利情绪低落,学习消极应付。请你用英语给他写一封e-mail劝慰他,鼓励他努力学习,并结合自身实际,提出应采取的积极态度和应对方法。词数:100左右Dear Zhang Hua, I’m sorry to hear that_______________________________________________


Dear Zhang Hua,
I’m sorry to hear that you didn’t do well in your last exam. You are not the only one who seems to try his best but ends up with a failure in exams. Quite a number of students feel the same way as you and they tend to lose their confidence and don’t want to study hard any longer. I’m sure you know that it’s unwise to do so because you might be left far behind.
I was once in the same situation as yours. Failure is the mother of success. In face of failure, what we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or to ask the teachers for advice. Anyway, Rome is not built in a day. Only by sticking to studying persistently can we make progress step by step till success. I truly hope I can be of some help to you.
Yours ever,
Li Ming


试题分析:提纲作文要求考生根据所给的写作要求和提纲,确定文章的中心思想,然后紧紧围绕中心思想展开写作。要求考生在保证内容要点全部概括的基础上可以充分发挥自己的想象,进而用自己的语言来表达某种观点或看法,增添了写作的灵活性,同时能较好地考查考生的想象能力和英语语言表达能力。
点评:写好提纲式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲,因此考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示,认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系,然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。根据所给提纲,列出要点,并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力,灵活运用英语知识,采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来,注意主次分明,详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展,按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
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