急求英语达人。。看看我写的这篇自我介绍有没有语法错误。如果没有。能修改的帮我修改一下。拜托了。急用
Hello!Boys and girl. My name is Ye Baoyi . I am 11 years old . I study in Xi Tou primary shool .I am very happy to see everyone . Now , let me show you how I am. I am a quiet girl . I like singing and reading books . I think reading books are good for my study and it can imporue my Chinese . I think singing is my favourite hobby . I love singing very much . I think singing can make me happy . This is me. A quiet girl . Do you like me ? That’s all . Thank you!
今晚用吖~
当然各位亲。以上的名字是自己拟的。亲们能用那个名字，把自己修改的那一篇写过一次。
see everyone改为 see you all
how i am 改为what I am like （我是什么样的人）
reading books are good ...改为reading books is good ...（虽然books是复数，但主语不是books，而是reading books）
improve打错字了追问
那亲。你能复制上面那篇再改过给我么？我看的有些晕。
追答Hello!Boys and girls. My name is Ye Baoyi . I am 11 years old . I study in Xi Tou primary shool .I am very happy to see you all. Now , let me show you what i am like. I am a quiet girl . I like singing and reading books . I think reading books is good for my study and it can improve my Chinese . I think singing is my favourite hobby . I love singing very much . I think singing can make me happy . This is me. A quiet girl . Do you like me ? That’s all . Thank you!
Now , let me show you how I am. 最好改成
Now,let me tell you something about myself.
I think reading books are good for my study and it can imporue my Chinese 改为
I think reading is good for study and it can improve my Chinese
I think singing can make me happy 为了上下文贯通最好改成，
And it can make me feel happy. So,this is me.追问
亲。请你把以上改过的在文章里弄好。再弄给我。亲
追答Hello!Boys and girls.
My name is Ye Baoyi .
I am 11 years old .
And I study in Xi Tou primary shool .
Today, I am very happy to see everyone here.
Now , let me tell you something about myself.
I am a quiet girl . I like singing and reading books .
I think reading is good for study and it can improve my Chinese .
I also have a hobby, it is singing. I love it very much .
I think singing can make me happy .
So this is me, Ye Baoyi . Do you like me ? That’s all . Thank you!
That's all. Thank you!
see everyone改为 see you all
how i am 改为what I am like （我是什么样的人）
reading books are good ...改为reading books is good ...（虽然books是复数，但主语不是books，而是reading books）
improve打错字了
中的 imporue 是什么意思，没有这个单词吧！是 imporve 吧！
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