第1个回答 2009-08-22
Today the weather was clear and sunny. Chen farm with us to hard labor. Look! There are a variety of fruits, there are apples, pears, orange ~ ~ ~ ~ had to let me a sigh: "Oh, too beautiful!" And then we start working. Chen also picked apples with us. The help of some girls were holding the ladder, while the boys climbed on a ladder picking apples. Other students are busy putting on the truck. The students picked apples big red, red sun looks like. Bite, Hey! Non-acid-sweet, just right! The students all day to work on the farm. Watching trucks go much of the apple and we sweat, we all laughed happily! Finally, Wang uncle invited us to eat dinner.
第2个回答 2009-08-22
It's clear and sunny today. Chen took us to the farm to work. Look! There are many kinds of fruits, apples, pears, orange ~ ~ ~ ~ have to let me exclamation sentence: "oh, it's beautiful!" Then, we began to work. Chen and pick apples. Some girls are to hold ladders, and boys climbed the ladder to pick apples. The other students are busy put the basket on the truck. Students pick apples big red, looks like the red sun. Bite, hey! No, not just good acid sweet! Students in farm work all day. At the big apple lorry walk and sweat, we all laughed happily! Finally, Uncle wang invited us to eat dinner.
第3个回答 2009-08-22
Today the clear weather, the sunlight is beautiful. Mr./Mrs. Chen leads us to go to the farm to be the hard labor. Looked! Here has various fruits, has the apple, the pear, orange ~~~~ can not but let me sigh one: “oh, has been too attractive!”Then, everybody starts to work. Mr./Mrs. Chen also together picks the apple with us. Some female students help to hold the ladder, but the male students climb up the ladder to pick the apple. Other schoolmates in are busy at putting the basket to the truck on. Schoolmates pick the apple greatly is red, seems likely the red sun. Nips one, well! Not sour is not sweet, was just good! Schoolmates one diligently work all day in the farm. Looks that the truck carried the big apple and everybody's sweat, we smiled happily! Finally, Uncle Wang asked us to have the supper.
第4个回答 2009-08-31
那个自己翻出来的人翻的就行。
我给人说句公道话:这个东西不用过去式,谁也没法翻。
发生过的事情就要用过去式啊。
第5个回答 2009-08-31
如果你们老师不让用过去时,那就是你们老师脑子有问题,你可以考虑更换班级了 。
事实上那个自己翻译出来的水平真的不怎么样,有好多处错误,不过就初中生而言就凑合着用吧
Today's whether 就很有问题,拼写错误还是其次,用法就不对,最好用Today the weather is,还有 Mr.Chen take 应是 Mr.Chen takes 还有so many variety of fruits不对,so many和variety of根本不能连用
我晕,实在受不了了,我不一点一点指出来了,麻烦,简直不能入眼,那位大哥,英文不好就不要出来秀,你这样残害小朋友丢不丢人啊
最后给你句最真诚的忠告,你还是别用那个自己写的,本身拼写单词就很有问题,加上明显的语法错误,唉,如果你不怕被老师罚被同学笑话,你就照抄好了