请大家看看我写的这篇英文故事有没有什么语法错误和用词不当的问题

如题所述

从开头到第七行的... for a while. 不仅没错，而且表达得很好。接下去的句子首先是时态要改为过去时。即改为：... she was a clever person. ... could make...追答

下面一句market 前加the。
接下来的句子 when the prince was loitering... 和上文衔接不紧。建议改为：One day the prince saw her when loitering in the street. He fell in love with her immediately. He was very fond of her beautiful works. He bought...

倒数第五行the witch 改为 a
witch。

从语法角度看，没有问题了。

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