急!!高分!!关于英语翻译的!

我是高一的学生,明天就要上课了,而明天上英语课我们有FREE TALK这个环节。。
明天该我了,求高人速度翻译!

求译:
大家好,我的名字叫JOE,今天是我的TALK SHOW时间。
我的英语成绩不好,但我很努力的在学习。
我希望能和大家多多交流,分享英语学习的方法。
因为我的理想是能够出国学习(留学),所以掌握英语是必要的。
希望大家能够多多帮助我学好英语,谢谢。

回答的好的有加分,但条件如下:
你可以在我的原文上做你认为好的适当修改,当然要合适。
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万分感谢!

Good morning/afternoon /Hello everybody, my name is Joe.Today is my time for the Talk Show. I'm not very good at English, but I was studying very hard.
I hope we can communicate often and share our experiences(经验) on English learning.
My ideal is to study abroad, so it is very important to me to master English .
I hope that we make progress in English together(我希望我们能在英语方面取得共同进步).Thank you!
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第1个回答  2009-02-22
Hello everybody. My name is Joe, and today is my turn to present at the Talk Show.

My English is not so good, but I'm study hard on it.

I hope I can communite more with everyone, and share the methods of learning English.

Because my dream is study aboard, therefore, it is necessary to master English.

I hope everyone can help me study English. Thank you.

照原文手工翻译的。简单易懂,放心使用。
第2个回答  2009-02-22
大家好,我的名字叫JOE,今天是我的TALK SHOW时间。
我的英语成绩不好,但我很努力的在学习。
我希望能和大家多多交流,分享英语学习的方法。
因为我的理想是能够出国学习(留学),所以掌握英语是必要的。
希望大家能够多多帮助我学好英语,谢谢。
Hello everyone, my name is JOE, today is my time to TALK SHOW.

My English score well, but I was trying very hard in the study.

I hope a lot of energy and everyone would share their English language learning approach.

Because my vision is to be able to study abroad (to study), so master the English language is necessary.

I hope everyone can help me a lot to learn English well, thank you.
第3个回答  2009-02-22
Hello everyone, my name is JOE, today is my time to TALK SHOW. My English score is not very well, but I was trying my best in the study. I hope i could have more chance to communicate with others and everyone would share their English language learning approach. Because my vision is to be able to study abroad, so master the English language is necessary. I hope everyone can help me a lot to learn English well, thank you.(本人完美修改版!!!请验收!!!)
第4个回答  2009-02-22
Good morning everybody. My name is Joe, It is my ture to have a talk show. My English grake is not good. But I have been learning English hard. I hope I can often communicate with you, let's share the ways to learn English. Because my ideal is to go abroad to study, it is necessary to master English for me. I wish you can help me more learn English well. Thanks a lot.
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