请大侠们来帮我改改错，这是我用上各种工具慢慢翻译的一篇文章，在下不才，里面很多错误，请大家帮忙指出
Decide the fate mentality
Why do some people more successful than others , make more money ,have a good job . But many people busy work can only earn a living . In fact , there is not much difference between people .
Many psychologists found , the secret is that people "mentality" . A philosopher said:” Your mentality is your real master” . A great man said:” Either you go to control life, or lives control you” . Your mentality decides who is a horse , who is a jockey .
About forty years ago , two brothers lived in a poor rural in Fujian province . They could not stand the poor environment , so they left the rural to go abroad development . Older brother seems more fortunate , who was sold by the slave owners to the affluent San Francisco , the younger brother was sold to Philippines where is more poor than China .
Fortunately , the brothers met each other about forty years later . Today, they were no longer what they used to be . The old brother already was the San Francisco community leader , had two restaurants , two laundries , a grocery store and large families , some inherited the business , some became outstanding engineers and other IT professionals .
However , How about younger brother ? who became a world-renowned banker unexpectedly , he had the mountains, rubber plantations and banking considerable weight in Southeast Asia . After decades of effort, they are successful . But why do their career achievements have such big difference .
The older brother said:” We Chinese people to the whites’ society , and there is not special talent . We only cook for whites by our hands . Overall, we do whites not do . Life is no problem , but do not expect the career . For example , although my offspring very knowledge , but not dare suppose , only to go play some middle-level technical work to make a living .
The older brother know his brother’s success , can not help envy his brother's lucky .
But younger brother said:” lucky is without. First came to the Philippines do some menial work , After a while time I found local people are stupid and lazy . Slowly acquisitions and expansion, business gradually bigger . This is the true history of struggle of the overseas Chinese .
This story tells us , not just environment affect our lives, mentality control our action and thinking, At the same time, mentality decide our vision, career ,achievement. A people’s success depends on his mentality. The difference between successful person and loser is that successful people always use the most positive thinking, optimistic spirit and the most glorious experience to dominate and control of their life . The loser is just the opposite , Their lives are guided and dominated by the past failures and doubts.
为什么有些人比其他人更成功，赚更多的钱，有一个好工作。但很多人忙碌的工作才能谋生。事实上，人与人之间的差别不大。
许多心理学家发现，秘密是人们“心态”。哲学家说：“你的心态是你真正的主人”。一个伟人说：“要么你去控制生活，或生活控制你”。你的心态决定谁是马，谁是一个赛马。
大约四十年前，兄弟俩住在一个贫穷的农村福建省。他们不能忍受恶劣的环境，所以他们离开农村去国外发展。哥哥似乎更幸运，谁被卖为奴隶业主富裕的三藩，年轻的兄弟被卖到菲律宾比中国更是可怜。
幸运的是，兄弟见面的大约四十年之后。今天，他们不再是过去的样子。老兄弟已经是三藩社区领袖，有两家餐馆，两家洗衣店，杂货店和大家庭，有些继承制，有的成为优秀的工程师和其他专业人员。
然而，年轻的弟弟怎么样？谁成为一个著名的银行家，他山，橡胶种植园和银行相当的重量在南洋。经过几十年的努力，他们是成功的。但为什么他们的事业成就有这样大的差异。
大哥说：“我们中国人的白人社会，并没有特殊的人才。我们只做为白人的手。总的来说，我们的白人不做。生活是没有问题的，但不要期望职业。例如，虽然我的后代很有知识，但不敢想，只有去玩一些中级技术工作谋生。
大哥知道他哥哥的成功，不禁嫉妒他的兄弟的幸运。
但年轻的弟弟说：“幸运的是没有。第一次来菲律宾做一些粗活，一会儿后，我发现当地人又笨又懒。慢慢地收购扩张，业务逐渐变大。这是真实的历史斗争的海外华人。
这个故事告诉我们，不只是环境影响了我们的生活，心理控制我们的行动和思考，同时，心态决定我们的愿景，事业，成就。一个人的成功取决于他的心态。成功者和失败者之间的区别是，成功的人总是用最积极的思考，乐观的精神和最辉煌的经验支配和控制自己的生活。失败者则刚好相反，他们的生活指导和主要由过去的失败与疑虑。追问
不是要翻译，是指出我的错误
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比如说第一句中的：make more money ,have a good job.你这样写的话，这段话就没有主语了，你想表达的是：为什么有些人比其他人成功，比其他人有钱，还有一份好工作?
这样表达可能比较好：why do some people more successful than others, the money more than others.and have a good job?
建议你可以上网搜一些翻译的网站，翻译的时候，直接把完整的句子打上去，这样翻译出来的效果可能会比较好追问
英语的底子太差了，谢谢！
追答没关系的，只要多背写单词，勤动口，多看看双语电影，听听英文歌曲，就很容易学了。没问题，加油
本回答被网友采纳Why are some people very successful with a great amount of money and a good job while others are engaging in day to dat tasks of earning a living? In fact, there are not lots if differences between the two kinds of people. Many philosophers found mentality as the key point. As the greet man said, "either your life controls you, or you controls your life." it is your mentality that tells a horse from a jockey.
About forty years ago there were two brothers in Fujian province. Not able to endure the harsh environment, they went aborard for better development. The elder one was more fortunate for he was sold by a slave owner to San Fransisco while the gouged one went to Philipines, which was even poorer than China.
Forty years later they met each other. The elder one was a cmmunity leader, owning two restaurants, two laundries and one grocery store. The big family he raised also has achieved the flourish for some inherited the business, some became engineers and others IT professionals.
你先看看感觉如何，好的话我继续翻。本回答被提问者采纳
