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one World,One Dream
This simple ten words, give infinite power of Chinese people, especially for I but the speech is also a kind of strong spirit to encourage, this is the slogan of the Olympic game of 2008 Beijing.
The Chinese people's Olympic game to 2008 Beijing is total to take a kind of expectation.Remember at the beginning process of bid for the Olympic game, the Chinese committee of Olympics also obtains 2008 Olympic games to hold the power with difficulty.This time the Olympic game of 2008 Beijing, for China is a develop of a fair show, is also a fair show that emerges the Chinese magic power toward international community.
The meeting badge" China prints Peking that dance of ?move" of the Olympic game Chinese special features.The characteristics of Peking and Olympics exercise the chemical element handiness combine.Red, in China always is to represent the good luck pleased to celebrate the color.Meeting the badge adoption red, represented the Chinese people to the international community of fine wish the wish." Chinese Peking, welcome the friend of the world-wide locations" adopted the Chinese Chinese brush-pen word Chinese characters simplified Chinese style, design special.Explain out without reserve the calligraphy magic power that China spreads fame the overseas.
China is an everyone's court for harmonize, we are living under the environment that dulcify thus, everybody is a happy child.The mascot" the FU WA" of the Olympic game also just represented us this is happy.Innocent child.
The FU WA is be"ed face"" clear and bright"" the NINI" of" the shell shell" by" the HUANHUAN" five be filled with the Chinese race special features of doll constitute.The homophonic of five FU WA name add exactly" Peking is welcome you".This expressed the Chinese people's amity to the people in the world again.The color of the FU WA also acts in cooperation the Olympics at the right moment five yellow turquoise blue of red orange of wreaths, expressed perfect annotation of Olympics to spirit of Olympics of Peking.
The Olympics of 2008 Pekings, the dream of a Chinese, bears in the applause of the world and the tears of the Chinese nations.Be a member of the Chinese nation, I will use the most sincere voice, saying loudly:
" Bless you, belong to China, belong to Beijing, belong to our 2008!"
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翻译完了。。。累死了...
先说明:我是意译,不是逐字翻译的

one World,One Dream
"同一个世界,同一个梦想"
This simple ten words,
这简单的十个字
give infinite power of Chinese people,
给了中国人民无穷的力量
especially for I but the speech is also a kind of strong spirit to encourage,
对于我来说这句话更是给了我无穷的动力
this is the slogan of the Olympic game of 2008 Beijing.
这是2008年奥林匹克运动的口号
The Chinese people's Olympic game to 2008 Beijing is total to take a kind of expectation.
2008年在北京举办的全中国人民的奥运会是个完完全全的心理期待。
Remember at the beginning process of bid for the Olympic game,
想想在开始申奥的时候
the Chinese committee of Olympics also obtains 2008 Olympic games to hold the power with difficulty.
中国的奥林匹克委员会也是经过千辛万苦才获得举办资格
This time the Olympic game of 2008 Beijing,
而这一次,2008年的奥运会将在北京举行
for China is a develop of a fair show,
这对中国来说是一次展示机会
is also a fair show that emerges the Chinese magic power toward international community.
同时也是向世界人民展示中国人民力量的时候
The meeting badge" China prints Peking that dance of ?move" of the Olympic game Chinese special features.
那个印章“舞动的中国印”(哈,这就是人译的,在线翻译,才翻译不出那个问号呢!)展现了中国人民的独特面貌。
The characteristics of Peking and Olympics exercise the chemical element handiness combine.
而北京的独特神韵也与奥林匹克运动巧妙的结合了起来。
Red, in China always is to represent the good luck pleased to celebrate the color.
红色,在中国通常代表着喜庆和好运。
Meeting the badge adoption red, represented the Chinese people to the international community of fine wish the wish."
红色的印章,代表了中国人民对世界人民友好的愿望。(在线翻译竟然把fine翻译为罚款,我晕...)
Chinese Peking, welcome the friend of the world-wide locations" adopted the Chinese Chinese brush-pen word Chinese characters simplified Chinese style, design special.
中国北京,欢迎从世界各地来的朋友,这是通过中国毛笔展现出来的简体中文的风格,外形独特。
Explain out without reserve the calligraphy magic power that China spreads fame the overseas.
毫无保留的展现出毛笔字的神韵将中国的荣耀传遍四海。
China is an everyone's court for harmonize, we are living under the environment that dulcify thus, everybody is a happy child.
中国的每一员都期待和平,我们都生活在和平的环境中,我们也都很快乐。
The mascot" the FU WA" of the Olympic game also just represented us this is happy.Innocent child.
奥运吉祥物“福娃”就是代表了这种快乐。
The FU WA is be"ed face"" clear and bright"" the NINI" of" the shell shell" by" the HUANHUAN" five be filled with the Chinese race special features of doll constitute.
福娃是(不会翻译...)简单和明快,妮妮,(?shell shell?),欢欢,五个代表了中国特殊风格的娃娃
The homophonic of five FU WA name add exactly" Peking is welcome you".
这五个福娃的谐音正是北京欢迎你。
This expressed the Chinese people's amity to the people in the world again.
这再次表达了中国人民对世界的友善
The color of the FU WA also acts in cooperation the Olympics at the right moment five yellow turquoise blue of red orange of wreaths,
福娃的颜色也同样代表了?(不会..)
expressed perfect annotation of Olympics to spirit of Olympics of Peking.
完美诠释了北京奥运会的奥林匹克精神
The Olympics of 2008 Pekings, the dream of a Chinese, bears in the applause of the world and the tears of the Chinese nations.
2008年北京的奥运会,这个中国人的梦,y
Be a member of the Chinese nation,
作为中华民族的一员蕴含了全世界的掌声和全中国人民的泪水
I will use the most sincere voice, saying loudly:
我要用我真诚的声音,大声说出:
" Bless you, belong to China, belong to Beijing, belong to our 2008!"
祝愿你,属于中国,属于北京,属于我们的2008!
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第1个回答  2008-06-21
你是要翻译还是要改正原文?里面错的太多了,基本上就是中文的机器译本,现在又要回到中文上去?
one World,One Dream
This simple words give the infinite power to all of Chinese people. especially for me, the speech is also a kind of strong encourage of spirit, this is the slogan of the Beijing 2008 Olympic Games-------------------
ten划掉了,用英文表达就不是十个字了。of也错了,I 也错了,also a kind of strong spirit to encourage也错了.算了,不改了,改完等于重新写一篇了,另外楼上也辛苦翻译了。
我只奇怪一点的是,这么个错误百出的文章,他也能翻译的这么好,真厉害。
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The Chinese people's Olympic game to 2008 Beijing is total to take a kind of expectation.Remember at the beginning process of bid for the Olympic game, the Chinese committee of Olympics also obtains 2008 Olympic games to hold the power with difficulty.This time the Olympic game of 2008 Beijing, for China is a develop of a fair show, is also a fair show that emerges the Chinese magic power toward international community.
The meeting badge" China prints Peking that dance of ?move" of the Olympic game Chinese special features.The characteristics of Peking and Olympics exercise the chemical element handiness combine.Red, in China always is to represent the good luck pleased to celebrate the color.Meeting the badge adoption red, represented the Chinese people to the international community of fine wish the wish." Chinese Peking, welcome the friend of the world-wide locations" adopted the Chinese Chinese brush-pen word Chinese characters simplified Chinese style, design special.Explain out without reserve the calligraphy magic power that China spreads fame the overseas.
China is an everyone's court for harmonize, we are living under the environment that dulcify thus, everybody is a happy child.The mascot" the FU WA" of the Olympic game also just represented us this is happy.Innocent child.
The FU WA is be"ed face"" clear and bright"" the NINI" of" the shell shell" by" the HUANHUAN" five be filled with the Chinese race special features of doll constitute.The homophonic of five FU WA name add exactly" Peking is welcome you".This expressed the Chinese people's amity to the people in the world again.The color of the FU WA also acts in cooperation the Olympics at the right moment five yellow turquoise blue of red orange of wreaths, expressed perfect annotation of Olympics to spirit of Olympics of Peking.
The Olympics of 2008 Pekings, the dream of a Chinese, bears in the applause of the world and the tears of the Chinese nations.Be a member of the Chinese nation, I will use the most sincere voice, saying loudly:
" Bless you, belong to China, belong to Beijing, belong to our 2008!"
第2个回答  2008-06-20
同一个世界同一个梦想,这简单的十个字给予中国人民尤其是我无限的力量,这是奥运2008年北京口号.也是一种强大的精神鼓励中国人民的奥运比赛是在2008年北京共采取了一种在开始的过程中申办奥运,中国奥运委员会还获得2008年奥运会举行的权力与difficulty.this时间的奥运游戏2008年北京,中国是一个发展一个公平的展示,也是一个公平的出现表明了中国魔术的权力走向国际社会。
会议徽章“中国版画北京表示,舞?动议”的奥运会的中国特别features.the的特点,北京和奥运会行使化学元素, handiness combine.red ,在中国始终是代表好运,高兴地庆祝颜色。次会议通过的红色徽章,代表了中国人民对国际社会的罚款想的愿望。 “中国北京,欢迎的朋友,世界各地的地点”通过了中国中文毛笔钢笔字的汉字简体中文的风格,设计special.explain了毫无保留的书法魅力,中国传播名利海外。
中国是一个每个人的法院协调,我们生活的环境下表示, dulcify因此,大家有一个愉快的吉祥物“福华”的奥运比赛,也只是代表我们来说,这是六一儿童。
福华是被“教育署面对” , “清晰明亮” , “妮妮” , “壳牌” “欢欢”五充满中华民族的特色娃娃constitute.the谐音五个福华名称添加正是“北京欢迎你” ,这表达了中国人民的友好,向世界各国人民的again.the颜色的富华还的行为,合作的奥运会在适当时刻5黄河翠蓝的橙红色的花圈,表达完美的诠释奥运精神,奥运的北京。
奥运会2008年pekings ,梦想,一个中国人,在熊的掌声世界和泪水,中国nations.be的成员,中华民族的,我会用最真诚的声音,大声说:
“保佑你,属于中国,属于北京,属于我们的2008年” !
第3个回答  2008-06-20
同一个世界同一个梦想
这个简单的十个字,给予无限的权力,中国人民,尤其是我,但讲话也是一种强大的精神鼓励,这是口号,奥运2008年北京。
中国人民的奥运比赛是在2008年北京共采取了一种expectation.remember在开始的过程中申办奥运,中国奥运委员会还获得2008年奥运会举行的权力与difficulty.this时间的奥运游戏2008年北京,中国是一个发展一个公平的展示,也是一个公平的出现表明了中国魔术的权力走向国际社会。
会议徽章“中国版画北京表示,舞?动议”的奥运会的中国特别features.the的特点,北京和奥运会行使化学元素, handiness combine.red ,在中国始终是代表好运,高兴地庆祝颜色。次会议通过的红色徽章,代表了中国人民对国际社会的罚款想的愿望。 “中国北京,欢迎的朋友,世界各地的地点”通过了中国中文毛笔钢笔字的汉字简体中文的风格,设计special.explain了毫无保留的书法魅力,中国传播名利海外。
中国是一个每个人的法院协调,我们生活的环境下表示, dulcify因此,大家有一个愉快的child.the吉祥物“福华”的奥运比赛,也只是代表我们来说,这是happy.innocent儿童。
福华是被“教育署面对” , “清晰明亮” , “妮妮” , “壳牌” “欢欢”五充满中华民族的特色娃娃constitute.the谐音五个福华名称添加正是“北京欢迎你” ,这表达了中国人民的友好,向世界各国人民的again.the颜色的富华还的行为,合作的奥运会在适当时刻5黄河翠蓝的橙红色的花圈,表达完美的诠释奥运精神,奥运的北京。
奥运会2008年pekings ,梦想,一个中国人,在熊的掌声世界和泪水,中国nations.be的成员,中华民族的,我会用最真诚的声音,大声说:
“保佑你,属于中国,属于北京,属于我们的2008年” !本回答被网友采纳
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